Here is my humble review of the poem titled “Social Evolution” written by ingenious humanitarian poet revered Bhagirath Choudhary ji, founder of the Global Literary Society.
Esteemed literary luminary dear Bhagirath Choudary ji
Your magnum opus “Social Evolution” a satire on the mean world’s humanity drive is an eye opener. Humane approach in the society which is captivated in the vanity passion is bleeding to inhumanity in the existing world of fake glitters. Justice, equality and brotherhood are displayed in the window shopping of the progressive stores of the world. Had there been life to the words uttered by the orators of social equality and law implentors, no innocent, poor and victims of heinous deeds would have flowed in their own gush of tears. The lines quoting the pathetic plight of history witnessed in the yesteryears sweeping humanity to the abyss of inhumanity with the royal wand of power and fraudulent prestige is rightly pointed with elegance by the poet.
“It repeats gory history behaving like Roman Pilate,
Murdering Jesus to sweep humanity under royal carpet”
Introspection in the insight of society in frequent retrospective analogy alone would lead to ameloeration in admiration to humane attitude of the living luxurious lifestyle of the people. Poet’s suggestive note not to haunt humanity for pleasures senseless and profits meaningless speak louder with the conscience of the readers. The conclusion of the poet as a message to self provokes the readers to find goodness in everyone around irrespective of indifferences inhumane. Let’s hope that this eminent work seeps in to the hearts opening the eyes closed by the pride and mad stride of inhumanity.
Kudos to the esteemed poet and revered personality of inspiration for composing such an exquisite write for the benefit of human race as an assest to the literature.
@Rajani Mula
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October 27,2019.
Contemporary Poems – 18
Social Evolution
Humanity is a divided nation,
While One lives for narcissistic sadist vanity passion,
Second exists for all loving altruistic Sanity,
For all inclusive love of Justice and equity
Humanity living under animal mode
Exists and insists upon vanity of sadist code
Who seeks pleasure in sorrow of others
By justifying poverty of their sisters and brothers.
Humanity living in humane mode,
Exists and insists upon universal welfare road,
Seeking own happiness in happiness of others,
By working for their forgotten sisters and brothers.
My business with world begins with a sacred warning,
I must be cautious when I open my eyes in morning,
My Inner Eye decides how I deal with earthlings,
My belief system decides my worldly dealings.
Man is the Wisdom Eye on Evolutionary Pyramid
If human eye is closed with illusionary golden lid
Then narcissistic sadists play blind Wall Street game,
Hunting humanity for pleasure and profit what a shame ?.
My sadist eye with blinders of narcissistic vanity,
Sentencing with tortuous existence to poor humanity,
It repeats gory history behaving like Roman Pilate,
Murdering Jesus to sweep humanity under royal carpet.
Let me choose to see good in all sentient beings,
Including downtrodden and forgotten human beings,
I pray, let my eye be a kind altruistic eye,
Let me be truthful and see good in all before I die.
© Bhagirath
Choudhary
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October 27, 2019
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