Review by himu

Extremely happy to share the critical review of my poem done by esteemed poet cum reviewer of global acknowledgement Himanshu Jena

Esteemed Rajani Mula ji,
Your poem entitled “Be a Giver ” is a bliss of unending flow for the great cause of humanity. Nothing is absolute in this relative world. Even the darkest cloud in the sky has its silver linings. We all are the byproducts of our times that face many a challenge to the core. Moreover, we have tears as our sole companions in us still we smile and laugh as we ought to go many a mile with integrity and dignity before our eternal rest. Even the sky, the moon, the stars, the rain and the plants are not free of limitations! Thus, the poetess suggests us being kindhearted and empathetic to one and all in our thoughts ,feelings and actions adoring the core values in them and ignoring their loopholes. We are the ignited spirits born to ignite others with ours sparks divine. How can we light the lamp of love and humanity when our lamps are put out? Thus, it’s high time to march together with the sacred weapon of love being a selfless giver .Kudos to you, esteemed poetess for composing such a unique poem on the spring of optimism in the journey of life divine.

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Himanshu Bhushan Jena
27 October, 2019

Be a Giver

Sky that showers warmth
Sheltering the Sun hot
Does even lash us with its cane
Yet we adore the sky and Sun
We blame not its bounds

Moon that mesmerizes us
Hides us in caves of glooms
Drowning us in darkness
Depriving us from light
Yet we can’t blame its bounds

Stars twinking in twilight
Think not about our joy
Often they do disappear
Disappointing us densely
Yet we can’t blame its bounds

Rain that guarantees growth
Ruins us rudely at times
Drinking our tears
And deserting us from its showers too
Yet we can’t blame its bounds

Plant at times
Fail to fill sweetness in the fruits
At times they yield not aptly too
Yet we can’t blame its bounds

Nothing in the world is perfect
None in the universe is flawless
Everyone is bound by some bounds
Everyone is victim of some odds in life

Let’s be compassionate with whom we meet
Let’s accept them with all their flaws,
as pleasantly as we ought to accept ourselves
Let’s learn ignoring the dotted dirt
Let’s learn adoring the spotted best

Let’s go hand in hand
Instead leaving hand for a hand
All are thirst of love
So are we
Let’s be the giver
before we become the receiver

@Raji❤