Review

I am all praise for esteemed poet cum reviewer Poet Bala. His expertise on writing reviews is adorable. As an appreciation and applause to him I am glad to share the review he did instantly as a reaction to my poem “Lip before you Rip”. Gratitude to you dear prodigy. Blessings in abundance to you for your bright future.

It’s a philosophical- magic poem on life’s logic, fly freely with your powerful ink which is soft in tone and tune though it has something strong behind to think and sink with the brain deep. It wakes my soul to grow bold since the life is just like a glass bowl. Awesome awesome and awesome. Your need for mental peace is beautifully lyrisized and your urge for serenity is much needed now in this mechanical world where people are urging to make money and material things. Moreover you compares life to a glass and wine to peace. Therefore, the empty glass reveals the emptiness of life which is led by the laymen, hence you ask them to fill the wine ( peace) to relish the life heartily. Though life is short, people entwined themselves in material knots. Due to this you just remember them the impermanence of life and asks them to respire peace until they suspire their last breathe. Wow !!!!! and wonderful!!!! No words to praise your ink. Beyond the excellence.. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

LIP BEFORE YOU RIP

Glass of life
Filled to the brim
With wine of love
Intoxicates one

Tipsiness of it
Can tackle
Intolerable
Impossible
Inappropriate
Indomitable
Burdens

Fill your glass
To the fullest
Offer such glass
As a celebration

LIP before you RIP
Live in peace
Before
you rest in peace

Glass isn’t eternal
But wine filled
Let’s you be eternal
Fill glasses with wine
Wine of love!!

@Raji❤