A garland of gleeful gems, I call the following post😍. Elated extremely on sharing the elegant review of Cijo Joseph Chennelil ‘s affluent review of my poem “My love”…..
MY LOVE
An instantaneous response of Sonia Batra ‘S lovely love poem
Love me when I lose my balanced state of mind
Love me when I go mad
For your loving word
Love me when I cry
Missing your coy
Love me when I say
don’t speak to me
For I can’t live without
speaking to you
For I can’t live without
Loving your love
For I can’t live without
Waiting for you
My tears crave your sight
My heart starves for your love
My smile secludes itself
For it can’t be beautiful
Without your sight of it!
Hold me in your hands
My palace is your embrace
Let me shine bright in your
Eyes, your sight turns me beautiful
Speak to me till night melts
in your speech
Let my life be ripen in your love
Sour I am so long you taste me not
Sweeten me with your sweetness!
@Rajani mula
Rajaniji,
Your poem titled “My Love” is a poem that exhorts humanity to love one another whatever will be the situation or circumstance.The concept of love is an everlasting one because true love never engages in possession,domination or destruction.True love never ends rather it does have an interminable existence altogether.When the feeling of love descends down upon an individual,everything else takes a backseat.In fact,love does not have a timescale and it is not influenced by any force here on this beautiful Earth.The most enduring aspect of love is spotted in this universe wherein the Sun loves the Earth and the Earth in turn loves the Sun and the animated and the inanimated things in the flora and fauna kingdoms here on this Earth love one another.Love once initiated can’t be set aside because it is a lifelong matter altogether.The concept of love doesn’t hurt or harm anyone whatsoever rather it freely gives and nurtures.Kudos to you for composing such a poem of fantastic nature.
Cijo Joseph Chennelil
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