Poetry

Hir a Thoddaid poem (extended)

6 lines- aaaaba rhyme scheme
5 lines of 10 syllables in each stanza
6th line of each stanza is of 9 syllables with alliteration

Let’s live once in a life time!!

Wish to be in your arms close to your heart
On the tuft of grass in the nature’s art
Listening tweets of the birds from the cart
We shall go where sky and earth meet to chat
Passing through the glares of the glowing sun
Pleasing all pretty plants as a part!

Let me live in your eyes as your love dream
Your kindest heart as my palace of beme
You’re my sea! As tides of joy let me scream
With your radiant touch of love let me gleam
Wish I be the air you breath as your life
Lit my life lamp with your love and gleam!

Let’s glide in the love chariot like a dove
You’re my moon! I wait like star for your glow
run like a river to merge in your flow
As alluring smile on your lips I move
Once in a life time let me have my dream
Let’s weave web we wished for our love!!
@Raji❤

Pc: My beloved husband and I
Clicked three years ago….